mchasewhittemore's Reviews

[Ketchup & Mustard]

Great Graphics but what was that story line

I really liked the graphics. I think the "time passes" frames could have been a bit better, but in general there is a real quality to your graphics.

Your story line though... it just wasn't funny.

Still, I can't believe this is your first animation, the graphics were really good.

[Low Punch]

cool

I think this could be really good. The animation looks nice, simple yes, but nice. Sadly, I agree with SilverRose516, way to short. Beef it up a bit and resubmit.

[PSA: SMOKING]

love the last line, wish I could have heard it

I really like the story line. The cop killing the kid was great. But the sound stunk. If I did not have to strain to hear the cop I would have given you a better score. Still good job. (loveing it)

MaSh3R responds:

Yes it stinks bad mike but the sound is now louder, i had to sleep then goto college before i could fix it

[Candy Skies]

Enjoyable...

enjoyable for a bit, but why not a milky way - we are in the sky.

[Heads and Hearts]

Fun Game Play

Way to much waiting... The cut scenes look nice, but in the end they slow down the game and take away.

[Avoider Flash Tutorial++]

Looks good.

I'm happy to see this tut as it seems a good way for people to start learning code.
With that said, what about something about stopping the enemies from going off screen?

TheSongSalad responds:

yeah, that would have been a lot more complex than the tutorial was covering though. thanks for the review.