Great Graphics but what was that story line
I really liked the graphics. I think the "time passes" frames could have been a bit better, but in general there is a real quality to your graphics.
Your story line though... it just wasn't funny.
Still, I can't believe this is your first animation, the graphics were really good.
I think this could be really good. The animation looks nice, simple yes, but nice. Sadly, I agree with SilverRose516, way to short. Beef it up a bit and resubmit.
love the last line, wish I could have heard it
I really like the story line. The cop killing the kid was great. But the sound stunk. If I did not have to strain to hear the cop I would have given you a better score. Still good job. (loveing it)
Yes it stinks bad mike but the sound is now louder, i had to sleep then goto college before i could fix it
Ummm... this movie needs help
I want to say, the next text part, was a great touch. But the snail was to slow. I think I could have ate dinner on the moon. I get the irony, my comic is random... blah blah blah. If you maybe added different views of the snail moveing really slow things would feel better.
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